darknation Posted April 9, 2011 need 5 people to read through the darknation book beta and pump me full of feedback. Apply within. 0 Share this post Link to post
AirRaid Posted April 9, 2011 In what format can I expect to recieve your tome of scum and villiany? If I can get it in a PDF then sure, I'll test-drive. 0 Share this post Link to post
Chopkinsca Posted April 9, 2011 How long is it? I'd love to test-read it, but not sure if I could fit it into my schedule. That, and I'm not good at criticism. 0 Share this post Link to post
Kirby Posted April 9, 2011 I'm tempted to apply.....would it be interesting and hold my attention all the way through? (As long as I can read it I'll be sure to get through it) 0 Share this post Link to post
Creaphis Posted April 9, 2011 I'll admit I'm intrigued. I should have time to read through it next week. 0 Share this post Link to post
darknation Posted April 10, 2011 AirRaid said:If I can get it in a PDF then sure, I'll test-drive. .doc only atm, but I have no doubt someone will put it in a PDF file very shortly. 0 Share this post Link to post
Planky Posted April 10, 2011 If goatse/tubgirl/lemonparty hasn't ruined me yet; dn's masterpiece surely will 0 Share this post Link to post
Clonehunter Posted April 12, 2011 darknation said:need 5 people to read through the darknation book beta and pump me full of feedback. Apply within. What are you asking for? You want five poeple to read through you, dressed as a Book? And pump you full of what now? Ha ha just kidding. I can spot a good story easy. Good grammar easier. If your willing to let me I'll read through it. I'm almost finsished wth 'Jaws' here. 0 Share this post Link to post
Clonehunter Posted April 13, 2011 Fuck you , you stupid goddamn sonuvanbitch. Take a damn joke. 0 Share this post Link to post
AirRaid Posted April 13, 2011 Clearly you dont know dn very well, and so are probably unsuited to this anyway. :P Edit: Turns out DWF is very bad at telling you that you have PMs. Got mine now! 0 Share this post Link to post
deathbringer Posted April 13, 2011 Do people have to read the same page hundreds of times to try and "break" it? 0 Share this post Link to post
Shaikoten Posted April 13, 2011 DN your book is bad and you should feel bad. 0 Share this post Link to post
Planky Posted April 13, 2011 Shaikoten said:DN your book is bad and you should feel bad. You pickled panda arsehole 0 Share this post Link to post
Clonehunter Posted April 14, 2011 AirRaid said:Edit: Turns out DWF is very bad at telling you that you have PMs. Got mine now! Hear 'dat! 0 Share this post Link to post
darknation Posted April 15, 2011 Shaikoten said:DN your book is bad and you should feel bad. silence, turdmancer. 0 Share this post Link to post
Maes Posted April 15, 2011 Count me in, big guy. Will your book hit me with the force of Doomguy's FORCED and PAINFUL Chocolate Shotgun? 0 Share this post Link to post
darknation Posted April 20, 2011 I demand judgement. Read faster, shitqueefs. 0 Share this post Link to post
Planky Posted April 20, 2011 Im about 250 pages in shitlick. The overall feeling is you are trying to be an edgy as fuck, overly descriptive version of Terry Pratchett. Can I continue reading? Apparently so! at least until I find a new game to install on my phone instead of an ebook reader. Bitch. 0 Share this post Link to post
Shaikoten Posted April 21, 2011 DN, trying to be edgy?! I don't believe it! 0 Share this post Link to post
Kirby Posted April 22, 2011 darknation said:I demand judgement. Read faster, shitqueefs. I keep picking it up and putting it down, based on when I have time, only gotten through the first chapter (or intro, whatever that first part is in italics). So far I call it dark comedy that I actually want to keep reading. More diagnosis after I read more. 0 Share this post Link to post
Creaphis Posted April 22, 2011 darknation said:I demand judgement. Read faster, shitqueefs. oh right this thing 0 Share this post Link to post
darknation Posted May 28, 2011 attention beta testers. the time is now. ladle me with your critical juices and allow my mind to marinade in thought. 0 Share this post Link to post
Chopkinsca Posted May 28, 2011 I haven't been able to focus on reading so I can't be of much help. I did read the first chapter and liked what I read. Very visceral. 0 Share this post Link to post
darknation Posted May 30, 2011 seems to be a common theme. I'll add in more explosions and car chase scenes to lure the reader further into the novel. o no wiat 0 Share this post Link to post
geo Posted May 30, 2011 Do you still need anyone? I have great beta readers that are full of good feedback that improves books. 0 Share this post Link to post
AirRaid Posted June 2, 2011 Well, I'm finally making good progress. And just now your book caused me to have an apparent hysterical breakdown in my office at work. Bravo sir. 0 Share this post Link to post